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Originally Posted by Mechanix544
I've been hesitant to post my "article" that I wrote on the Jackson signing in here, as it is chock full of errors since I threw it together in about an hour. But as this is my favorite Redskins forum, and I value your alls opinions here it is. Maybe you all can give me a bit of constructive criticism. One of my first articles ever, currently taking a couple journalism courses online to get better. Tell me what you all think.
The Washington Redskins - a Breakdown of the Desean Jackson Signing - Yahoo Voices - voices.yahoo.com |
I like it. Like you said, it has some punctuation errors, but as far as the content and analysis, I think it's great. Better than a lot of articles on ESPN and NFL.com. Post more if/when you write them.