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Re: Redskins Sign DeSean Jackson
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Originally Posted by Mechanix544
I've been hesitant to post my "article" that I wrote on the Jackson signing in here, as it is chock full of errors since I threw it together in about an hour. But as this is my favorite Redskins forum, and I value your alls opinions here it is. Maybe you all can give me a bit of constructive criticism. One of my first articles ever, currently taking a couple journalism courses online to get better. Tell me what you all think.
The Washington Redskins - a Breakdown of the Desean Jackson Signing - Yahoo Voices - voices.yahoo.com |
I actually read that a couple of days ago. Nice work other than punctuation I would try to use a few more paragraph breaks. It becomes junked together on an iPhone or any other cellular device. Good stuff though and insight. BTW totally agree on this set of receivers having the potential to be better than or as good as the posse. I said as such earlier in the thread
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