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Re: The guys we signed and drafted are Looking up to what there suppose to do?
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Originally Posted by SmootSmack
First of all, you gotta learn your homonyms. Once you figure that out, at least you're thread title might make sense
Secondly, just learn how to write more legibly overall. You started with a paragraph just running through a bunch of FAs from the past three years it seems. Then you went into bullet points.
Thirdly, narrow it down. How far back are you going with your analysis, two years, three years?
Fourthly, keep the thread to your original intent. Meaning, if you're going to ask us to evaluate the free agents/draft picks of recent years then let's just talk about that. Save the "What should we do next year" for another thread...and much, much, much later in the year.
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Fifth, but most important, you have somehow managed to have all your punctuation spaced one space away from the end of the clause/sentence, but with no spaces between the punctuation and the next clause/sentence. By punctuation I mean periods and colons, because there's not a single comma in that entire post.
It's baffling that you could actually do that with about 90% of your periods and colons. I'm almost impressed in a way.
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