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03-03-2008, 09:08 PM | #1 |
You did WHAT?!?
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: In The Kitchen With Dyna.
Age: 35
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A song I wrote Opinions appreciated
I am in a band and I just finished writing the lyrics to this song and needed some feedback:
SAVE ME
(Verse 1) I cant believe from what I see, This Life I live is killing me, There is no secret I dont forgive and I dont forget, You lied to me this tragedy Society gives no sympathy So I ask you.............. (Chorus) Who's gonna save me? Lifetime of agony, no one to set me free, Who's gonna save me? Before my past destroys me Who has the answers? (verse 2) My walls are closing in, Deeper and deeper I sink, Deeper and Deeper I sink Why won't you let me inside You can run but you can't hide, You lock me up all the time, So I ask you........... (Chorus) Who's gonna save me? Lifetime of agony, no one to set me free, Who's gonna save me? Before my past destroys me Who has the answers? (Bridge) I stand alone on this dark and lonely road, looking off in the distance As my past has shown, I bare no resistance, The beating sun gives no assistance, As I wander through the unknown (Chorus 2 times) So I ask you...................... What do you guys think?
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